Rhetorical Moves

I keep thinking about my project 3 and I'm pretty sure my next rhetorical move will be to expand on my abundance of metaphors. In my rough draft, I focused on incorporating as many creative metaphors as I could, yet I failed to actually explain the deeper meaning behind a majority of them. I think allowing myself to simply explain myself and my story will let my reader understand more about my place. After I expand on the rhetorical moves I have already used, I will compare my place in an abstract way to the essay entitled "Gettysburg Regress." By proving to my reader that my writing is not obscure and useless, it will help to solidify my essay.